Mirlen Shadowfire

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@Mirlen101
Character Name:Mirlen Shadowfire
Race:Altmer
Age:500
Sex:Male
Marital Status:widowed
Sexual Orientation:Straight
Physical Description:(attached image)
Flair:Expanded life span
Like:
-women
-knowledge
-to help others

Dislikes
-people miss using magic
-psijic order
-those who miss treat others

Strengths
-Magic (all forms)
-decent with a sword
-strategic
-Lore
-persuasive
-strong sense of right & wrong

Weakness
-Women(any)
-Speed
-The cold
-fear of losing others

Background:
Mirlen is a high elf with a great love for magic which made him join the mage's guild.Against the wishes of his wife he agree to go to his first expedition with the guild to a dwemmer ruin. In the ruin Mirlen discovered a secret ruin where he was taken into a trace and a ghost of a long dead dwarf appeared to him and gave him a ring and promised him great power if he wore the ring, but it had it's price. Mirlen did not care if there was a price he accepted the ring gladly. When he returned home from the expedition he finally had a chance to test the rings power only to be disappointed that i did nothing, but little did he know that activating the ring was draining the life from his spouse and once night had passed the dwarf appeared to him in his dream and told him that his wife was dead and the ring was now a permanent part of him,the power the dwarf had promised was extended life which was taken from his wife. Devastated by the revelation the elf left his home of the summer set isle and traveled to the same ruin where he had found the ring there he learned knowledge of great magic as well as how to wield a sword in case he cannot use his magic. One day after years of living in isolation when he was making a food run he heard of the great troubles that had befallen the world so he decides to return to the mages guild and combat the forces of evil with his magic as well as make it a better place.

i can see you are off to a decent start here, but unfortunately this doesn't fit in with accepted community lore. If you could just edit and refine it a bit and change bits of the story, maybe instead of a Dwemer, he stumbled on a cursed ring in a tomb (Something that absolutely can happen, cursed items are sometimes left to bait would-be grave robbers or adventurers.)

Also, it is not uncommon for altmer to live well past the age of 500, as they have very long lifespans.

If you have any questions or need help, feel free to message me or any other officer.

so should I redo it or is it accepted?

so should I redo it or is it accepted?

Just edit what you have so that it fits with accepted lore and dial back some of the rings effects. Once you do that, I will approve it.