Accurolos

EAO @name: @Hely1000
Name: Accurolos
Race: Khajiit
Age: 23
Sex: Male
Marital status: complicated
Sexual Orientation: Straight

Physical Description:
Accurolos is an average-sized khajiit with dark black fur and a little gray on his chest keeps his hair vary short to keep out of the way in battle do to his past. He has a scar above his left eye that you wouldn’t unless you know where to look and Has green eye. Due to his background he is always aware of his surroundings and he has trained himself to hear the stiles noise. He will sometime to keep his hear at these state that he will wake into a well populated city with a blind fold on, and if he every look like his guard is down it not he always has a hidden daggers hidden if he can't get to one he get to another.

Personality:
Likes:
- Combat
- Drinking
- Knowledge
- Shiny thing

Dislikes:
- The law
- Some people
- Daedric
- Hate spider but has to fight them

Strengths:
- Addicted to combat
- Is a werewolf
- Persuasive
- Intimidating
- Stealthy

Weaknesses:
- Lack of compassion
- Trust issues
- inability to relate to others
- Anger
- Don’t work with groups well

Connection to the Dominion:
caught the eye of some people and was asked if he would like to join and he did. He became a assassin with his stealth skill he was very good at it. During his travel he was also was looking for a place to call home, and got pull into the queen of the Aldmeri Dominion had admired some of his handy work.

Backstory:
When Accurolos was born in Skyrim he was love and cared for, till one day when he was eight his family up and left him. He was alone for four year and found only one way to live stealing and running till a person from the thieves’ guild came and toke him in, and he has been with them ever sense. When a job went south his partner had betrayed him and was put into prison end that’s when the trust issues. Watches out for himself and only him. When he was sixteen he went back to Skyrim for a job and got bit by a werewolf in the process. By the age of 20 he was able to control the beast inside and stop himself form killing, the only time his is not able to control it is when he is vary anger and it just comes out. One day during a job he had to kill a couple of people, and caught the eye of some people and was asked if he would like to join and he did. He became a assassin with his stealth skill he was very good at it. During his travel he was also was looking for a place to call home, and got pull into the Aldmeri Dominion the queen had admired some of his handy work, and that bring us to present day.

A few things need to be revised before I can approve this. Firstly, you'll need to add a section titled, "Why is your character in Dominion territory? How did they get here?" Your character, regardless as to whether or not they're from Dominion territory, must have this question answered on their character sheet. For assistance on what this means, click here. For an example character sheet, click here.

If I were going to be picky, I'd also ask that you flesh out your physical description a bit more. Just a bit of filler text would work, but you can also look at some character sheets such as the one I provided to get a good example of what we're looking for.

There is one more thing regarding your character's lycanthropy. While your character is allowed to be a werewolf, they are not allowed to have "full control" over their affliction. While your character may be able to have self-control in transforming, they are not to be treated as a normal, sentient human when in their primal form. In lore, complete control over oneself while transformed is nigh unheard of; while it is possible to a degree, this can still depict metagaming and is, therefore, simply not allowed. If you're simply saying that he's able to hold himself back from turning to a degree, however, then this is perfectly fine.

You're on the right track; just fix these little quirks and clarify on your character's lycanthropy, and you'll be good. For a set of rules regarding supernaturals, visit these links below.

IC Town Laws (Read the laws regarding Lycanthropes) - Click Here.
Supernatural Faction Roster - Click Here.

Ok i have fixed it or what i think would be fixing it

You'll still need to add a section titled, "Why is your character in Dominion territory? How did they get here?"

I did i put it in the the backstory

You need to make a separate section for it. See this character sheet for an example.

Ok does that work

Well, that'll work. Approved 10/11/2016.